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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
My hometown is located at the bottom of the most interesting place Mountain Hua. it is very beautiful and has simple and hard-work people. You can't see indusry plants to disturbe your life, but you can enjoy the mountain and warm springs to listen the voice of nature. Every morning, you will see the sun rise from the Mountain Hua and shine the small city. Sky is blue and the mountain is clear. If you want to touch closely with nature you can climb the mountain taking one day and then you can have a warm spring bath to relax. You must feel happy and worthy if you come the pretty city. Welcome!
