行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以;文章词汇表达不够丰富,在拼写方面也要继续努力;采用了一些简单的从句。
absolutely we should not put all eggs in the same basket. if we do that, we will take more risk to break down all the eggs in the graund one time. We will be the largest fail man. you must left one opportunity to yourself at least when you do something. Of course, if you are ensure it will be successed at one hundred precent, you can run the same road to the end. but I think this kind case should lest precent. So you should put your eggs in the devided.