新东方托福高分作文:人们是否该做些他们不想做的事儿

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Nowadays, with the development of socialty, there are more and more things that can enjoy people. So, as a result, people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do. In my opinion, I think this phenomenon is wrong and we should do things we should do. There is a lot of things that we do not want to do. For example, we don’t want to see the doctor when we have something wrong in our body; we don’t want to get up at the morning even we still have some important things to deal with; we don’t want to wash our dirty clothes after a tire working day and so on. But even we don’t want to do these things, we have to do those in the end, because we have no choice. Learning is another things make us feel crazy. When we are the age in school, we all know we should study hard, but we are usually want to do the things that we enjoy, like playing games and surfing on the Internet. You can spent some time to do these things, but you should remember the main thing you should do. Only if you study hard can you do the things you enjoy when you grow up. So, we need spend more time on doing things we should do rather than doing things we like. We should know why we should do this thing, and whether it is useful to us. Some enjoyment things can only lose ourself and have no good to us, we should not addict to it.