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建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；全文结构较为严谨。
As we know,life is short but we can do something to make it better,deferent,even longer in some ways. We love to help others to make a deference,like Leifeng,a common one helping others as he can.We adore him not only because helped others in his way,but also he sought his goals to make his life unlimited.There is no doubt that he is a hero.So we can be our own hero,if we do something meaningful. What we can do to color our life? In my view,we can do some housework to help our family,or find our dream trying to achieve it.What we can do is what we want to do.Life is meaningful,if you enjoy it.
