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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17431
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
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文章层次较为清晰;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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Computer and Man In modern society,computer has becomes more and more important.People start out for communication without face to face each other.They are sharing thier moons on the internet,and looking for the information on it.Computer,laptop,netbook PC,no matter when,or where people enjoned to use them to inplace of mans.It is a big such phenomenon in nowadays. There is different opinions about the relationship with computer and man.Some people think that this is a change for communication,study,entertainment and so on.It is changed every people's life,and changed the life styles.However,there's another people objects this viewpoint.They feelt that use computer frequently will inpediment people to communicate each other every day.And the computer will make people to be lack sense of trust. But,for me,I think it has dual character in our daily life,we shoud objective to handle this.As a tool,computer will be afford many essential information to us,we can use it by reasonable.It will change our life.

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