结构良好,但是语言不流畅;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,另外请重视拼写检查。
I have a good friend, his name is Tom,he has a bule eyes,he is very handsome,we are classmates. Tom is good at swimming.Very summer holiday,he teaches me swimming.and he help me in my study,we do the homework together,and we are the neighbors.he is very fine. I very like him. I hope that our friendship become better and better.