2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

There is a strange phynomenon in relationship betweent education degree and umemployment rate, that the higher the education degree is, the higher the unemployment rate is.How does the phynomenon happen? In my opinion, The higher expectation to salary and work is the main reason.For example the unemploymen rate of doctocs is 25% which is more 1% than professional people, and more 11.1% than these people without high school education.Becasue doctors usually are glad to work with high salary, good welfare and comfortable environment or standing the top of technology. They put themselves higher positons which demonstrates their value,ability and wealth. Another reason is that avaliable higher postions are less than those based work. For example, there may be one manager in one company but there may several hundreds staff. Anyway, more education is not a bad thing But it is important how to use it to creat wealth. And You should learn to stand the risk of higher unemployment rates when you decide to improve your education.