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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮;文章能较灵活使用词汇,高级词汇有些少,还需注意个别拼写错误。

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In our society,the phenomenon people often make decisions indirectly when they had just seen what or listeten what. It is very unwise for us to make decisions without our mind or deep information. People usually have some gossip with others in daily life and believe what some merchant advertisements on the TV or the online with watching moments.Some frauds who will take whatever they can are trying to get other trust.Therefore,we also know millions of cases about financial cheats on unwise taking account. In my ideas,we should pay attention on our mood and learn how to calm down ourselves in orde to prevent being used or being caught in a trap.For example,we try our careful mind to watch papaers and listen words,and then make our first decision to what to do.However,we have to remind ourselves that without hesitate.

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