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In our society,the phenomenon people often make decisions indirectly when they had just seen what or listeten what. It is very unwise for us to make decisions without our mind or deep information. People usually have some gossip with others in daily life and believe what some merchant advertisements on the TV or the online with watching moments.Some frauds who will take whatever they can are trying to get other trust.Therefore,we also know millions of cases about financial cheats on unwise taking account. In my ideas,we should pay attention on our mood and learn how to calm down ourselves in orde to prevent being used or being caught in a trap.For example,we try our careful mind to watch papaers and listen words,and then make our first decision to what to do.However,we have to remind ourselves that without hesitate.
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