文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
My friend is very beautiful, whose names are lily.she loving cats and dogs.One day, she seems a cat on the street and it was very clever.Lily wanted to hug it.Unfortunnately,she was injured and unexpected. In reality,even if she was injured, she also was concerned about a lot of animals in danger.I think lily has a kindness. Finally, I want to express:"You are my best and lovely friend! I'm very lucky Because I have you."