小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is very beautiful, whose names are lily.she loving cats and dogs.One day, she seems a cat on the street and it was very clever.Lily wanted to hug it.Unfortunnately,she was injured and unexpected. In reality,even if she was injured, she also was concerned about a lot of animals in danger.I think lily has a kindness. Finally, I want to express:"You are my best and lovely friend! I'm very lucky Because I have you." Lily,I’m your support. wonderful!