文中高级词汇表达比较恰当,但单词拼写不够认真;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;文章层次较为清晰。
The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication Nowadays,with developing of the time,the science and technology has play a indespensible roles in each person's daily life,and espeicial the Internet.People began to use computer or cellphone for chat on the Internet. However,there's difference opinions about web chat.Some people think that it is a big progress cuz' it changed our traditional chat way,and it makes our communication is became very convenience.Nevertheless,some people don't agreement with this opnion,they think it reduced the time of person communication each other face to face,it's easy products many estrangement with families or friends. As for me,I am support the two of side opinions,the Internet appearence has two impacts with positive and negative.It's lied on people how to use it,we can't just watch the surface of things,we should from the object angle to known these things.
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