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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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As we all know,the people will get the more earnings who have higher education background.However they will also have lower unemployment rates.From the chart,we can find this information too.If a man has the doctoral degree or the professional degree,he may be easier to find a good job than the man who just has a high school diploma. But it is just general run of things.To the other words,it's not said that everybody will have this result.Now I will show my viewpoint about this. First,in this world,a better job finds the better man.That is said that if you want to find a better job,you must to be a better man.You should study more knowledges by youself.You have to know the knowleges about the work which you want to do.That is to say you have to study and study instead of the eduction background which you have. Then,study all the life.If you can, you should study.If you can not,you should study too.This is the world that if you do not study all the time,you will be obsoleted so that you can not earn the money you want. So,if you want earn more money and you want to be not fired,you have to become better and better.
