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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
As we all know,the people will get the more earnings who have higher education background.However they will also have lower unemployment rates.From the chart,we can find this information too.If a man has the doctoral degree or the professional degree,he may be easier to find a good job than the man who just has a high school diploma. But it is just general run of things.To the other words,it's not said that everybody will have this result.Now I will show my opinion about this. First,in this world,a better job finds the better man.That is said that if you want to find a better job,you must be a better man.You should acquire more knowledge by yourself.You have to know the knowlege about the work which you want to do.That is to say you have to study and study instead of the education background which you have. Then,the people must study all the life.If you can, you should study.If you can not,you should study too.This is the world that if you do not study all the time,you will be obsoleted so that you can not earn the money you want. So,if you want to earn more money and you want to be not fired,you have to become better and better.
