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作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
The Greatest Use Of Life The time is limited,and our life is also limited,so how can us make good use of the time to make our life more meaningful. As a old saying goes,"the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it".I think this saying have many truth in it. We can do something which would beneficial to ourselves,such as reading and exercising, reading can promote our knowledge ,broden our horizon, and let us be more wisdom.Exercising can make our body more health,only have a good body,can we enjoy the wonderful world. Life is limited so we can make good use of time rather than squaing with other people, or it just waste our time. The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it
