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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9039
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

We always say that the life never telling a lie to us and don't lying ourselves.It's given us a better understanding of what the meaning of us, and it has given us what the sort of obstacles we need to overcome in order to make your life more valueable. Whatever you need,please value your little time and take your time carefully.Someone want to get a great score so that they could get good job in the future but they would spend their time on it lead to individual regret.If you are trying to let your lifehood more and more significance,please remind yourself never waste your time and try your best doing well done what you want effectively. You predict your future just only yourself and it’s just a matter of time before there is a victory in the future of wonderful life.

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