2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

My views on Online Shopping Because of the Internet,more and more people like to buy the things online.It becomes fashionable.Now I want to say something about it. First,there are many advantages of the online shopping.We can buy the thing which we love at home instead of going to the market.Of course,we can also have lower price of the goods because we can compare the price on the Internet.Then,we can pay for the goods on the Internet which is very convenient. However,every coin has two sides.Online shopping also has a few disadvantages.At first,the quality of the goods which we buy can not be guaranteed.After that,the safety of the pay is not reliable.To the other words,our money, on the Internet,is not secure. Finally,I think the online shopping is a wonderful thing.But if you want to buy something online,you should choose the goods carefully and take care of your password of the payment.