2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

Computer and man It is a dull topic. To me, I treat computer as half the angel and half the devil. Angel: 1. get to know the world without stepping out of the room. 2. Chat with friends and relatives on the internet. 3. I have to say that internet is one of the most remarkable and brilliant invention in the world. It allows us communicating with each other behind the screen, which avoid embarrassment in some situations. 4. Play games. This is a perfect way to kill time. 5. In fact, its function on helping people study reveals that people love playing games much more than studying. That’s the common human nature. Devil : 1. Avoiding people’s communication. 2. Waste too much time. 3. In fact I don’t hate computers, so I can’t think of more. in a word, man created computers, so man surely has the right to ask computer to do our work in so many aspects.