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Don't Be Afraid To Say "No" Nowadays,every people needs help in the world.We also have to give our hand to others in our life.But not every thing we should help. In our life,we will know and play with many people.That is said there are many things we have to face.Every people will have some problems which he can't solve by himself.Then,What should he do?Of course,he will ask for help from other people whom he knows.If the people is you,which will you choose?Yes or no?However,if you can't do this thing will or you don't have too much time to do this,I think you should say sorry to you friend. But most people don't say no if they have to say no.Why did it happen?To my opinion,the man who ask them for help is their good friend or they just have the courage to refuse.They think that if they refuse,it will destroy the friendship. Of course,if you said yes to you friends who asked you for help,your friends will be very happy.But,on the other hand,there are many disadvantages.First,it is your time.You have to spent much time to do it.Then,if you do not finish it,you will be very sad and the friendship with your friend maybe also destroy. So,if somebody ask you for help,you should say no when it is necessary.