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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1895
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Don't Be Afraid To Say "No" Nowadays,every one needs help in the world.We also have to give our hands to others in our life.But not every thing we should help. In our life,we will know and play with many people.That is said there are many things we have to face.Every one will have some problems which he can't solve by himself.Then,what should he do?Of course,he will ask for help from other people whom he knows.If the person is you,which will you choose?Yes or no?However,if you can't do this thing will or you don't have too much time to do this,I think you should say that you are sorry to your friend. But most people don't say no if they have to say no.Why did it happen?To my opinion,the man who asks them for help is their good friend or they just have the courage to refuse.They think that if they refuse,it will destroy the friendship. Of course,if you said yes to your friends who asked you for help,your friends will be very happy.But,on the other hand,there are many disadvantages.First,it is your time.You have to spend much time to do it.Then,if you do not finish it,you will be very sad and the friendship with your friend maybe also destroy. So,if somebody asks you for help,you should say no when it is necessary.

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