文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
Dear Mary, Thanks for your invitation. I'd love to go to your birthday party, but I can't,because I'm too busy. I have too many things to do.I have to go to visit my teacher because it is teachers' day.And I need go to supermarket to buy some vegetables and fruit.I even need to have a dancing class. Thanks for asking. Happy birthday to you! I hope you have a good time! Yours Lucy