作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of conserving natural resources and protecting our environment. Firstly, it is the most important that natural resources should be conserved so as to keep sustainable development. As is well known, natural resources are limited and some of them are not renewable. State leaders around the world have realized and acknowledge that we are likely to face a global energy shortage over the next few decades. So we should make wise of natural resources. Secondly, excessive exploitation of natural resources must be prohibited in order to protect our environment. Nowadays, natural disasters such as flood and drought occur more frequently. If we do not stop our unreasonable action, we will suffer severe punishment from the nature. Many measures can be taken, such as reducing waste and using of alternative energies. In short, we should make efforts to conserve natural resources and protect our environment.