2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Follow up with the poor is more and more seriouse ,amount of people have to torelate ,eapecially the people at African .As a result,the amount of volunteer is increasing,more and more people devote themself to voluntee. TO be volunteer,many people believe not only can help the one who desir having better life,but make an effect on themselves.The great point is to give warm to whom need to be helped.In addtion,we can open our eyes,and bring happyniess to ourselves ,even we will learn the skills we can't learn in daily life during the process. In my views,to help others can make ourself to be more happy,it is goog thing.On the other hand,to help others must consider our circumstance and our family .If we drop out everything ,even using all money we have,in spite of you can help others,but I think it harms to your family.In a word,we should help others,but ,we should be sure oursleves everything is good.