2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

文中从句和复杂句使用较为丰富；文中学术词汇表达比较恰当，但单词拼写不够认真；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

When it comes to making friends online,many people tend to be cautious.In my opinion,I opine that it is wise to make friends online. First of all,with the development of technology,people have easy access to computer,which enables them to make friends online.Moreover,lots of online social sites are established such as Facebook and QQ ,which provide a platform for people to make friends online.Furthermore,owing to the fact that we should cooperate with others in the competeive society,making friends online can help us tackle quantities of troubles.so it is necessary for us to make friends in the visual world. Making friends online do exsit risks,however,we can avoid being cheated so long as we are careful enough.With people's awarness of safety aroused,government has made laws to protect people.so I think making friends online will be popular and be of benefit to us.