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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;作者词汇基本功很好,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用。

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Whether a snap judgment can never be trust or not?Some may agree that judgments need deep consideration and careful thought to be trusted,and those judgments which were made quick can not be trusted. However, in my opinion, not every snap judgment can not be trusted. First of all, some judgments are meant to be snap. We can find quite a lot of proofs, especially in some particular professions.For instance, photographers, in which, despite the fact that there are part of photographers working in photostudios preparing for hours to get a satisfied picture, or those who work out in the field waiting hours with testing to finally get a excellent picture of landscape. There are some photographers, actually quite a number of them like news photographers or war correspondents, don't have models stand by or views hardly change.Every shot they take can be infer as snap judgment. As a matter of fact, most of the famous photographs ever took belong to this list. Secondly, the process of making judgments,can be trained to be both quick and accurate.In other words, the decisions can be made quickly with trusts. For example, solders, police officers, and most of all aircraft fighters. These people are trained to achieve the ability to making right decisions as fast as possible. Solders to eliminate enemies with least lost, policemen to estimate whether the suspect is dangerous enough for him to take activities, and as for aircraft fighters, as captain Mitchell said in 'Top Gun','When you are in the air, you don't think, you think, you die.' Can best explain this. Thirdly, not all the decisions require long-time careful thinking. Like choice we make where to have breakfast or which cinema we go for a film, there's no need to think too much about it, just follow the instinct will be fine. From what I have discussed above, many snap shot can be trusted not only be trusted and with its speediness it has help us a lot. It seems that in the problem of making judgment, we need both careful thinking and snap judgment.

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