高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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What I miss is my hometown past look like. There were rounded with trees,and you could see a lot of fish played with each other in clear river,but now the trees are lesser and lesser,I even cannot see any fish in the dark river that polluted by the growth of industry.At that time, though the house was too simple,the road was narrow,but I cannot deny that we had a healthy daily life.And as you can see ,the buildings are getting higher and higher ,and the wide road are full with cars,buses, truck and so an.But as a matter of fact that with the change of the town,we have to solve the pollution problems.