字数:200满分:100分
作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
As is vividly demonstrated in the drawing above, in a hot pot are numerous “cultural ingredients” of both domestic and alien origins including Confucius and Shakespeare, Taoism enlightenment, etc. It seems that the culture hotpot tastes both delicious and nutritious. The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of cultural blending. Firstly, the fusion of culture is conducive to the development of traditional Chinese culture. This combination of traditional Chinese culture with western culture will add new content and form to our traditional culture while keeping the proper foundation of traditional Chinese culture. In a addition, as China expends exchange in the area of culture, we find that more aspects of one culture integrated into the other. As traditional Chinese medicine and Kungfu gain popularity in the west, more and more Westerners seek to learn about other aspects of Chinese culture. There are similar patterns that western customs such as sports and holidays also becoming increasingly popular. In this way people from various nations in the world will be able to acquire better understanding of each other and live peacefully in this world. In my opinion, the blending of culture can contribute to making the world better. We should keep an open mind to accept the essence of other cultural and endeavor to preserve traditional culture. Only in this way can we enjoy the fruits of cultural integration.