可增加从句和复杂句的使用;文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分高级词汇,单词拼写也要仔细。
Today in the Information age,we can taking any messages over the world conveniently at any time.However, it also bring about too many problems such as internet fruad,advertisements explosion,internet rumors and so on. It's given us more effective and rapid on our daliy works and communications but we can't ignore its diaadvantages that information explosion not only make us live the fast pace of life, but also make our society more confusions about information whether if ture or false. At some times, we should give ourselves to have a rest and enjoy what we like to do. In my opinion, the government should take more rigorous measures to cut down useless informations or online rumors in order to protect our network community from horrible attack.