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复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富；文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
Today in the Information age,we can taking any messages over the world conveniently at any time.However, it also bring about too many problems such as internet fraud,advertisements explosion,internet rumors and so on. It's given us more effective and rapid on our daliy works and communications but we can't ignore its disadvantages that information explosion not only make us live the fast pace of life, but also make our society more confusions about information whether if ture or false. At some times, we should give ourselves to have a rest and enjoy what we like to do. In my opinion, the government should take more rigorous measures to cut down useless information or online rumors in order to protect our network community from horrible attack.
