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Today in the Information age,we can take any messages over the world conveniently at any time.However, it also brings about too many problems such as internet fraud,News Sensationalization Phenomena ,internet rumors and so on. It's given us more effective and rapid on our daily works and communications but we can't ignore its disadvantages that information explosion not only makes us live the fast pace of life, but also make our society more confusions about information whether if true or false. At some times, we should give ourselves to have a rest and enjoy what we like to do. In my opinion, the government should take more rigorous measures to cut down useless information or online rumors in order to protect our network community from horrible attack.
