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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12897
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Electronic communication will replace face-to-face contact Nowadays,because of the Internet,more and more people communicate with others online.They will talk with the people using the computers or their mobile phone who is far or near them.In the future,does the electronic communication replace face-to-face contact? I think it is yes. Now,let us talk about the picture above.In this picture,there are two people,a man and a woman.They are a child's parents.Their kid is on the upstair.To the other words,they are very near so that they can call their child's name by themselves.But they use the computers.Then you can image that the people will use the electronic communication instead of having a talk face-to-face. In fact,if some friends dine together now,they will like playing mobile phone more than talking with each other. So,in my opinion,electronic communication will replace face-to-face contact.

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