正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;文章层次较为清晰。
My favorite sport My favorite sport is football. I do remember how do I like it and find it so funny. I like it by chance. One day on my way home, I found a football and nobody else there. I took it back and did play with my friends. It was so interesting when so many people play together. So I always play with my classmates. We train and match together. Do you know who is my favorite football famous star ? Yeah, Beckham who is British. My biggest wish is becoming a professional football player in future.