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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。

用户练习作文:

In our daily life, Our first impression of a person or thing what we think they like,usually after having seen or heard them.It's given us to a worse understanding of truth what a person who had been known in one moment really like,although the person is handsome or beautiful. If you easily falling into temptation by their appearance,you will make a mistake or down in the trap.People always chase what they like such as beauty,wealth,status and so on, because of their desire.And if something parochial is blinding you,it's unwise for us to distinguish between truth and fault. In my opinion,although we can’t keep our mind soberly forever to eradicate temptation, it has given us lessons on how we would approach a preventive strategy.

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