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可适当增加从句和长句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
Everyone wants to know the information as much as he can know which is not good.Much does not mean good.As the saying goes"A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention". We always say that the Internet is a magic thing showing us a wide world.But sometimes it confuses me because it's irrelevant information.It is true that the most information is not right on target.So picking up the vial thing is important.First of all,we should have the ability to understand what is right and what is wrong.And then we should try to get information in the right way.What is more,when we distract by irrelevant information,asking for parents' help is always a good ideal. We can get target information if we take full use of it.
