题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。
On maintaining trust Trust is very important, as an chinese goes said, a people can't live without trust, it has a lot of truth in it. Trust is very important for us if we want to get along well with other people, and make good friend, at first, we should trust them, trust our friendship, emotion is interact, if we trust other, they also would trust us. Sometime it will happen something,which would involve the trust, during this time, we can't loose our trust to other, we should considerate and should not suspicuous some people easily. Or someday, it will lead to something which make you feel guilty. On maintaining trust is very important, but it not mean to tell to anyone your privacy, you should considerate the people isn't worth it, and then trust it.