2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用。

As is vividly depicted in the picture,many persons are crossing the street watching their mobile phones instead of looking at the street,which shows the increasing use of the cell phones causes folk's overusing the mobile phones. To start with,one of the most essential causes is that folks need to communicate with each other through the mobile phones across the distance sometimes.Moreover,the fundamental reason is that surrounded by the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology,public can surf the Internet by the cell phones.Finally,there are still,other influential factors standing out among them.More and more advanced mobile phones of brands have sprung up.For example,Apple and Samsung.