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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36978
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分56.5分
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简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文章层次较为清晰。

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My Best Friend Zhou Liang ,who is 16, is my best friend. He is not very tall, but he is very smart. He has many different interests. He is not only fond of music but also sports. He is a member of our school football team. Surfing the Internet is his favorite, too. He works so hard at his lessons that he does well in all the subjects. He is modest and ready to help others. He always helps me with my English patiently. With his help, I have made much progress and caught up with my classmates. Everyone in my class likes Zhou Liang, so do I.

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