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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9039
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

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A Brief Account of the Impact of the Internet on Learning There is a picture above.In picture,there are two people,a teacher and a student.The student whose left hand has a mobile phone asks the teacher that once he learns how to use Google,isn't that all the education he really needs?That is a good question. Nowadays, because of the Internet, we can find all the information which we need. If like that,what is the reason for learning? After all,the education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information.Of course, I will give some reasons about this. First,the knowledge is not information.It is the thing that can make us realize the world clearly and have a good time in our life.Then,the study we have is to make us better and better.It will improve ourselves but the information which we find on the Internet can not.We have to study the information to improve ourselves.Last but not least,we should learn how to study,so we have to have the education.In this world,we should learn all the time.To the other words,if you only can how to use google to find the information instead of learning the information,that is not useful. In the end,I want to say that the education is to teach us how to use and feel the information instead of learning to obtain information simply.

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