2010年考研英语作文真题:文化火锅，既美味又营养

文章衔接手法恰当；高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。

As is vividly demonstrated in the drawing above, Confucius is sitting together with three young people, who are living in the age of computer, and exchanging views in a relaxing way. What is conveyed in the picture is most profound and thought-provoking. The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of important of traditional culture. Firstly, Chinese traditional culture have rich historical value. As the crystallization of thousands of years of wisdom and creativity, the traditional Chinese culture are important carriers of historical development and progress.