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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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There goes a famous remark that"It is unwise to draw a conclusion once you see something or hear something."Simple as it may sound,its intend meaning is profound and thought-provoking. The remark implicitly tell us that while we making some decisions,it is sensitive to analysis the advantages and disadvantages of this item.There are numerous examples can explain my cite. In our daily lives, we all want to make friends with good looking people.In our mind,we always analysis a person by his looking.We practicly consider that good looking peole have kind and mercy mind. In fact, there is a reaserch about "Does appearance relateds to merit?" In this reaserch,a great of data determinated that a lot of individual which have better looking maybe more jealousy and infidelity than common people. To sum up,if we always judge a matter without analysis its substance,we probably make a mistake desicion.

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