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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
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有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

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When huaman society has come into an information age,people faced "Information Explosion",we may come to thecomclusion when we see or hear something,while it is unwise. Sometimes we may cheated by something what we see or hear.In my memory,one day I find my pen is disappeared afterclass which one my best friend send to me.I fond everywhere that I can remmerber,but i still not fond it.After that day,with depressed mood i came into the classroom,while i saw my pen in my classmate'desk.I tell him it's mime,unexpected he disacknoweldge,then i am angry and spoke loudly"i never want to see you".when i come back home ,my mother gave me the pen which i lost one.At that time ,i am to regret too say anything. After that,i know that draw a conclusion when see or hear something in unwise.

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