过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
When human society has come into an information age,person faced "Information Explosion",we may come to the conclusion when we see or hear something,while it is unwise. Sometimes we may be cheated by something what we see or hear.In my memory,one day I find my pen is disappear after class which one is my best friend send to me.I fond everywhere that I can remmerber,but I still not fond it.After that day,with depressed mood i came into the classroom,while i saw my pen in my classmate'desk.I tell him it's mime,unexpected he disacknoweldge,then i am angry and spoke loudly"I never want to see you".when I come back home ,my mother gave me the pen which I lost one.At that time,I am to regret too saying anything. After that,I know that draw a conclusion when we see or hear something in unwise.
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