2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；词汇量积累方面尤其高级词汇的积累要再接再厉，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

Computer and Man It is widely acknowledged that computer brings a lot of convenience.For examply,we can search information what we need,surf the internet,purchase goods and so forth.However,every coin has two sides.There is no exception in computers.Many accidents caused by having access to computer are drawing the attention of person. In acient times,people invented computers to improve individual's life quality.And with the rapid development of science and technology,the computer becoming pervalent.But people are virtually controlled by computer nowadays. It's high time that we should make great use of computers.Fristly,we are supposed to hold the opinion that we are leaders instead of slavers.Secondly,we should apply computer in our work.What;s more,we are bound to go out usually.