2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇。

No Excessive Packaging Nowadays,there are more and more goods which are on excessive packaing.That is not a good thing.Why this will be happen? In my opinions,at first,all people like beautiful things.So if give someone gift,it must be beautiful.To be other words,the goods' packaging are more and more beautiful that is to meet the needs of the people.Then if a man take some goods which have a good looking,he will have a good emotion.At last,the packaging become better and better.So,now,some goods have the packaging more than their value. So in the end,I think the gift is the gift.The gift should be beautiful.But the other goods have their own place and their own value.They should be useful instead of having a good looking.They should have a simple packaging that the people can take them home that is successful.Because many goods are practical things instead of decoration.