2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短。

No Excessive Packaging Nowadays,there are more and more goods which are on excessive packaging.That is not a good thing. In my opinions,at first,all people like beautiful things.So if you give someone gift,it must be beautiful.To be other words,the goods' packaging is more and more beautiful that is to meet the needs of the people.Then if a man takes some goods which have a good looking,he will have a good emotion.At last,the packaging becomes better and better.So,now,some goods have the packaging more than their value. So in the end,I think the gift is the gift.The gift should be beautiful.But the other goods have their own place and their own value.They should be useful instead of having a good looking.They should have a simple packaging that the people can take them home that is successful,because many goods are practical things instead of decoration.