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Changle is my hometown that locates in Fuzhou, there are many interesting places in Changle.My foreign friend will come to Changle for visiting my hometown. I am so happy and excited to know that, for which I have prepared for welcoming my friend in advance. Firstly,I will show the local museum to him. I suppose that if you want to visit a city you should visit the local museum firstly. There are wonderful history in the museum, you will learn a lot about this city after going to museum. Secondly, I plan to take my friend to Hexia Street. This street is full of delicious food, beautiful clothes, and interesting stores. When you come this street you will find that this street is a popular place where different ages of people have fun here. I will introduce distinctive food and interesting stores in Changle to my friend. Last, Jingangtui is a famous place in changle. The place is located beside the mountain and river, so we will see the clear river and beautiful scenery in there. Above all are worthy of visiting in Changle. However, there are many other interesting places in Changle for visiting. I'm happy to introduce my hometown to foreign friend. My hometown is a beautiful city, I hope people from other places can visit my hometown, and i hope i can devote myself to hometown if there is a oppotunity.
