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文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Thanks for your care. Because problem of language I was unfamiliar with classmates and teachers . But nowadays I become a part of them. I love English. I can learn very hard. I have a lot of problems of English.you can help me,would't you? It can be said with certainly I can fight
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