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2008年专八英语作文真题:College years have prepared you for your future life

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:17浏览次数:4050
要求:
题目 College years have prepared you for your future life
说明 In a few months' time you are going to graduate from university. How do you think your college years have prepared you for your future life? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: What I have learned from my years at university
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,单词拼写做的很好;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

用户练习作文:

As my college life is drawing to an end,it is about time to raise the question"what have I learned from my years at university?". To be frank,I did not learn too much. First,as to my professional knowledge,I just followed the flow of curriculum,neither lagged behind nor excelling in the class. I only find myself better in English than in high school or than most of those non-English-majors. I can speak English,but not very fluently; I can write in English,but just some easy articles; I can understand most of the materials in the textbooks,but not very professional or colloquial expressions; I can read in English,but often need to look up words in dictionaries. Secondly,I did not improve myself a lot in other qualities,such as leadership,team-spirit or communicative skills. The only society I joined was a so-called"Broadcast Art League",in which I worked for only half a year. The only one substantial working experience was interviewing a first-prize winner in a singing contest on campus. The unreasonable pride of the singer offended me and discouraged me from working on. Nor did I acquire any other abilities. I cannot work on computer skillfully. I learned nothing more than English and my second foreign language Japanese. I didn’t win any prize except one to encourage students who have made progress in their study---I once promoted my position in the class from beyond 20 toin college,that is,however grave a setback one meets,he should not sigh over it for too long. Instead,he should collect himself in time and find out all advantages around him or find a new target and head for it with all his strength.

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