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The annual summer vacation is coming,the children could alleviate ther mood ,in the light of own appetite.In my perspective,art museum is the best option.It has two advantages-enhance the thinking ability and enrich ther knowledge. The material is suitable for the kids on display at the museum of the specific characteristics of image considering ,befriends them to make the contribution between the concrete physical objects and abstract concepts ,which both for them to replenish more episteme and review the exciting knoeledge is very fabulous.