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作者能较准确地使用高级词汇，不过存在个别拼写错误；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练。
The annual summer vacation is coming and the children could alleviate ther mood in the light of own etite.In my perspective,art museum is the best option.It has two advantages-enhance the thinking ability and enrich ther knowledge. The material is suitable for the kids on display at th museum of the specific characteristics of image considering,befriends them to make the contribution between the concrete physical objects abstract concepts,which both for them to replenish more episteme and review the exciting knowledge .
