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The annual summer vacation is coming and the children could alleviate ther mood in the light of own etite.In my perspective,art museum is the best option.It has two advantages-enhance the thinking ability and enrich ther knowledge. The material is suitable for the kids on display at th museum of the specific characteristics of image considering,befriends them to mae the contribtion between the concrete physical objects abstract concepts,which both for the to replenish more episteme and review the exciting knowlede .
